Phobia. - Comments

  • Well, I'm obsessed. Please update soon.
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    <3
    June 7th, 2013 at 01:18am
  • I have not watched the Darh knight 2 but reading this makes me want to watch the movie :) comment swap brought me here and I just instantly fell in love with it :) very Dark and dreary with a great. The misery and suspense that this story is chocked full :) I love the layout an your writing skills are very good :) keep up the good work!
    April 5th, 2013 at 10:24pm
  • I love your story! Its orignial and your writting is pretty good and very interesting. Please continue. :) Its lovely.
    March 12th, 2013 at 04:25am
  • Dear author, first of all let me tell you that I'm not this kind of fan fiction so I'll treat as if it was an original fiction story. Here we go! XD The summary isn't interesting, yeah there's a bit of mystery but it didn't seem interesting enough to pull me in as for the first chapters, your writing style was okay. The descriptions were well written and the characters are developing nicely. Nice story's title by the way. It's simple as and short and not like those titles with ten or more words which aren't fit for stories. That being said, keep on writing. :] ~Marian.
    March 10th, 2013 at 02:29pm
  • Dear author, first of all let me tell you that I'm not this kind of fan fiction so I'll treat as if it was an original fiction story. Here we go! XD The summary isn't interesting, yeah there's a bit of mystery but it didn't seem interesting enough to pull me in as for the first chapters, your writing style was okay. The descriptions were well written and the characters are developing nicely. Nice story's title by the way. It's simple as and short and not like those titles with ten or more words which aren't fit for stories. That being said, keep on writing. :] ~Marian.
    March 10th, 2013 at 02:29pm
  • I think this story will be marvelous.
    February 21st, 2013 at 11:42pm
  • Ooh I love John Blake. And from the picture Keira looks gorgeous. This story has such an interesting plot line. I'm excited for another update! And I definetely can't wait for more of the backstory on Keira and her brother, plus more information on her father. I really like that you called it Phobia too. Very original name. But you should definetely keep up with lots of John in this story! I really like where you're going with this, or at least where I think you're going haha.
    February 12th, 2013 at 12:06am
  • Like it lots
    February 12th, 2013 at 12:03am
  • John Blake story, loving it! He’s such a beautiful man and thank you for writing a story on him. Dark Knight Rises is a brilliant film and I’m loving this already so much! The storyline gripped me straight away and I think you’re doing a brilliant job at this, keep it up I can’t wait for more! :)
    February 10th, 2013 at 11:23pm