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  • xSimpleEnoughx

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    I'd love to start the new story tonight if you guys would like that but before I can start I need a little bit more feedback and for as many of you as possible who are still reading my story by chance to vote on the poll below.
    June 28th, 2013 at 02:16am
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    http://www.easypolls.net/poll.html?p=51ccbd4fe4b03d6de54798dc Please vote! any other suggestions will be added!
    June 28th, 2013 at 12:32am
  • Bloody Bandit

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    I JUST READ YOUR STORY AND OMG
    YOU SHOULD NAMS THE BABY NIX
    June 28th, 2013 at 12:19am
  • plugsnotdrugs

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    Let There Be A Sequel c:
    June 27th, 2013 at 11:24pm
  • foreveritsyours

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    I honestly don't know what i would want out of a sequel, definitely lots more drama, I think I could see something really huge happening with Austin's Ex... But this story is FANTASTIC. I can't wait to read more!!! <3
    June 27th, 2013 at 10:06pm
  • EverythingIsMusic

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    That's was such a cute ending. I guess stuff with his ex in the next one is gonna be a big event, maybe pull out one of her exs. So far you're doing really good. I say just go with the flow right for yourself and what you think is good not what the readers want really.
    June 27th, 2013 at 07:16pm
  • xSimpleEnoughx

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    Thank you!
    June 27th, 2013 at 06:09pm
  • dropdeadsebring

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    The ending was so cute.c: I hope the sequel will be good.
    Cute baby names: Elise & Jayden
    June 27th, 2013 at 05:50pm
  • xSimpleEnoughx

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    I will! Within the next few hours most likely<3
    June 24th, 2013 at 01:34am
  • foreveritsyours

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    I am in love with this story omg please update soon!!!
    June 23rd, 2013 at 05:48pm
  • xSimpleEnoughx

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    I don't know who Vannah should end up with ugh :( but yeah I guess you'll find out in part 2 :/
    June 23rd, 2013 at 03:31am
  • OvercastGirl

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    1.) TEAGAN YOU FUCMING WHORE.
    2.) You go Aus!
    June 23rd, 2013 at 02:54am
  • xSimpleEnoughx

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    Oh just wait for it. It always gets worse before it gets better......
    June 22nd, 2013 at 02:51am
  • OvercastGirl

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    NO. TEAGAN GET YOUR WHORE ASS AWAY FROM BERT! BERT GO GET VANNAH! YOU'RE MEANT TO BE TOGETHER AND SLEEPING WITH HER LITTLE SISTER (WHO'S OBVIOUSLY JUST TRYING TO MAKE VANNAH JEALOUS) IS NOT THE WAY TO DO IT!
    June 22nd, 2013 at 12:51am
  • xSimpleEnoughx

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    Well thank you <3
    June 21st, 2013 at 08:59pm
  • Bandwhorecx

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    I still love your story. c:
    June 21st, 2013 at 08:15pm
  • xSimpleEnoughx

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    No more updates until I get some feedback :( I'm just dragging this awful story on with not actual eventful things happening.
    June 21st, 2013 at 07:44pm
  • OvercastGirl

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    AWWWW!!!! BERT!!!! <3
    June 19th, 2013 at 05:44am
  • xSimpleEnoughx

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    I'm updating later today <3
    June 8th, 2013 at 03:29pm
  • sarahmaah

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    i still love you and this story please never change ♥
    June 2nd, 2013 at 07:53am
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