I'll Hold My Breath - Comments

Thank you. I just want everyone to know within the next couple days I'll have another death in the family so I'm going to try and update today but if not I'm not sure when I'll update again. Probably 3 or 4 days from now.

I'm sorry for your loss, I know it must be hard but stay strong! :) <3

I love this story by the way, it's fantastic! x

I'll be alright I'm just having a hard time. There has been quite a few deaths in my family the past few months ad theres more to come in the months coming. I'm debating giving the character a bit more time to grow before I toss her out but as the story goes on along stops new characters will come into play. Maybe not in their own point of view but they will. <3

I'm so sorry to hear about the death in your family, I hope you're holding up!

As for the story, in my opinion you shouldn't keep the new character. Sorry :)

I'm trying to update, I've just had a really stressful past couple of days with a death in the family so I will update as soon as possible.

Amazing story! :D please update, and she should stay with Austin :)

I am, I would just really like it if people told me what THEY wanted to hear. Who they want to see who with. (: thank you

write more. now, please

Thank you, it's in it's most awkward beginning stages. I promise it will continue to get better. (:

I like this ALOT! It's really good :)