One Step Beyond Failure - Comments

Love Tom Brady and can't wait to read more

OOOOOO CHILD...BROMANCING IN THE LOCKER ROOM :P

*Sniffle* Poor Tom...... :'(

TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRNNNNNNNNNNNNN NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME I CAN'T EVEN ;SKJFKSFDVBGK;ASDBGAK;DBGAD;KLGBDAKL;GBDKLGBDLKGBJLKGDJB UGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH THE FEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELLLLLLLLLLLLLLLSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS :'( I CAN'T DO IT ANYMORE......HOW DO YOU EXPECT ME TO READ ANY FURTHER L;JSNDFKD;NAGKVABDGKDBGJGKBT

Oh my gosh the irony....life just sucks for him....like it's not okay....

ALLITERATION GIRRRRRRRRRRRLLLLLLLLL THAT WAS PERFECT :P

Always first class, nothing but the best ;)

WHOOOOOOOOOOO LET'S GO TO BRAZIL! WE'LL VISIT PEDRO :P

isubflkabdfhbgladkhgbadkl;hgb THIS CHAPTER....GOODBYE AGAIN....I CAN'T TAKE IT ;SKJDB;KASBGKDGBDKRGHB UGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME..... -_- SASSING YOU.

Okay, so I just started reading this...live commenting.

"the poison of defeat in my blood" .........love that line. :P

Poor baby.....he's being too hard on himself :(

"Their messages of pure love helped put a sweet taste back in my mouth after a night of swallowing bitterness and frustration." I LOVE THAT LINE TOO....IT'S PERFECTION.

kljdbvfk;djfg;kljdg;djbgdk;gb The emotion in this and just ugh sjbd;fksbkfdjbfgv;akDJgb;kdlhgab WHY ARE YOU SO BRILLIANT. GOODBYE......

I have to read the second chapter ever, but beautiful start *claps*

;KJSBFVK;DSJGBVAKDJBGKD;JGN;KGJDB GAH..........I can't get enough of this. Brady is just a beautiful creature.

HAAAA. Hangover. That sucks. :p

The stabbing pain of defeat. Ugh, that's too true. I just can't.

Tired, lifeless eyes... I spy with my little eye a TSwizzle quote. ;)

HAHAHAHA. Oh my God. Instead of saying R and R with the ampersand, it says amp; about five hundred times. WHY.

NOTHING'S FINE I'M TORN KNOW NOTHING IS FINE WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOU I HATE YOU.

Oooo...Goin' to Rioooo. Hahaha. I can't wait to read more of this awesome story. AHHH.

And yes, locker clean-out must be such a depressing thing to do. :/

Tom Brady (all right!) So, I'm watching the championship game against Baltimore, and can't help thinking that they're going to lose, and it's sad (oh, and my Patriot-fan boyfriend is climbing the walls.) Great first part! Post the next soon please! ❤

Oh my lord I'm so excited. Also, that picture in the background looks like it says "Nope" which explains quite well about how I feel about this story already.

NOT FEELING CLASSY ENOUGH. Oh, lawd.

I just realized I haven't been commenting that well. Too engrossed in the story. Sorry not sorry.

UGH HE TOOK THE BABY EXCUSE ME WHILE I SOB JUST SO PERFECT. And why is it that the guy always gets blamed? The girl was just as responsible for not being careful in the situation. -_-

Oh, gawd. GIRL THIS FIRST CHAPTER WAS SO FREAKING GOOD AND TOM BRADY IS BEAUTIFUL AND I LOVE YOU BYE.