Loved You First. - Comments

louis deffo doesn't get enough love on here! love it!

Update soon please :)

Omg please update this like pronto. I love it. :)

Ugh my heart skipped a beat when I saw this updated! Wow I love this chapter. Although, I already feel horrible for Niall because he'll probably no doubt get hurt if Kathleen is still wrapped up in Louis :(

Oooh I really want you to update this one! I'm insanely interested in how this is going to go!

Ugh this is SO GOOD!

You have to finish this!!!! :-)

I like this story because of the possibilities of how Kathleen is going to deal with her Louis issues. I have some sympathy for Kathleen because she obviously has deep feelings for Louis and cares about him in a way he doesn't reciprocate, but at the same time I can't help but feel like she puts herself in this situation so I can't feel bad for her at all. She's only causing her own pain by letting Louis use her for sex. She knows she can't have a real relationship with him and yet she willingly helps him continuously cheat on Eleanor. I feel like if she's gone and got herself into this situation, which she knows is just sex no feelings, then she can't complain about it because she knew what she was getting into with him.

Don't get me wrong, I like Kathleen. She seems like a really sweet girl who had the misfortune of falling hard for someone who's unavailable and I think a lot of girls have been there so she's relatable in that sense and that's what makes me feel for her and not look at her like just some slut Louis is cheating on Eleanor with.

That said, I'm not super keen on Louis right now. If he's cheating on his girlfriend and using Kathleen's fondness of him to get what he wants from her (he definitely has to know how she feels towards him) then that's pretty low. I could just feel my heart breaking for her when he pushed her hair behind her ear so sweet and gently like that. It just makes me mad at him because if he isn't going to properly be with her then he doesn't get to do that and he certainly doesn't get to be jealous of her and Niall cuddling up on movie night. He seems so selfish. He doesn't want Kathleen, but he doesn't want anyone else to have her either.

Right now, I wish Kathleen would come to her senses and stop fooling around with Louis. Niall seems to really fancy her and she's got a bit of a crush on him so I think she'd be better off with him. At least he'd definitely treat her with the respect every girl deserves. At the same time though I don't see her actually doing that. She's way too wrapped up in Louis and I'd just feel like she wouldn't truly be happy with anyone but him until she can break herself of her addiction to him.

Brilliant start. Louis and Niall, are you trying to kill me?! Lol I'm sitting on the edge of my seat, waiting for your wonderful update. :)

This is my favorite 1D fanfic:3 Louis and Niall oh my goshhhh!

Ugh!! Ive been waiting for this update forever and im so glad you finally did! I feel bad for Kathleen but she keeps coming back, Louis was so jealous during the movie and I loved it! :D

MY HEART HURTS FOR HER SO MUCH

I've read so many stories like this one and each time I still can't get over how fucked up shit is. And it's not really the cheating that's the most fucked up it's always how the guy treats the "other" girl. It's truely heartbreaking.

I really like this story :) Kinda feel sorry for Kathleen though please update soon... and I agree I don't see many Louis one's I am writing one at the moment if you want to check it out :D
I Won't Let Go would love to hear what you think :D

I know right!! I don't see many Louis stories. I'm working on one of my own, but it's still in progress. Anyway, I love this. Update soon please!! :)

You are such a good writer! I love your style a lot. And this story is really great so far. The idea is different. I can't wait to see where you go with this. It's hard to find a good Louis story so this one makes me happy :)

Love it! and I agree there are hardly any Lou fanfics on here xx

I like, really like it. Please update!!