With Closed Eyes - Comments

update soon love this

I love this story!

This was amazing as always!! I totally get why she's moving out, I wouldn't be able to handle living with him platonically like that after having his penis in my mouth. Lol. I can't help but wonder who his sub is. Maybe it will just be some girl, but I feel like it's going to be someone shocking. I dunno, maybe I'm wrong? Update soon!

Ahhh! And sigh. Why is Matt denying himself? Is something gonna happen on his birthday? That's what I'm going for lol. Loved the update, I'm loving thus story a lot!

Okay Matt is complete douche because its clear that he does have feelings for Paulina because the way he gripped his bottle when she made a joke about him missing out of sex with her is a definite sign that he does like her. Unless he is afraid that he does pursue his feelings then things fall apart, their friendship will end. I can't believe he is bringing his so called sub to something he shares with Paulina. Doesn't he know at all that she may still be hurting and he is just rubbing salt on that gaping wound on Paulina's heart???? I can't wait for the next update!

I absolutely LOVED this update! I can't take it though! I want her to be Matt's! Ugh! C'mon! More soon :DDDDD

I like where this is going. I think Paulina leaving will force Matt's hand. Plus it will add a twists, twists are nice. Thanks for writing.

I like this story :). Every time I think of Paulina I think if Eponine from Les Miz. I think because both characters love their friend but they don't return the same feelings. Also both are singers lol.

Poor Paulina, maybe she should bring Nathan. That will definitely turn tables. However, I'm not sure it would be good.
<3 Michele

Well at least there still trying to be friends. She's seems to be taking the high road and is trying to move on.

Every Story You write is beyond good. Paulina is crushed cant matt see that. cant wait for the next chapter.

Poor Paulina :( What is Matt problem?? he obviously likes Paulina -__- and I think is lying and he doesn't have any collared sub.

I honestly think Matt is lying about his collared sub, but maybe not. Loved the update. Have fun in Santa Cruz.

This story is so great. I'm looking forward to read more soon :)

Agghh!! Gosh! He is sooo stupidly blind and she needs to stop putting Matt before her! She's basically Matt's doormat....it's hair pulling frustrating! I'll probably end up bald by the time he figures it all out lmao!

Chapter Three:
Oh. I feel so fucking silly right now.
I spent the longest time thinking that Master V was actually Zacky V. And I kept thinking about it, and wondering what thatmeant for the guys, like if he was the owner of that house then he wasn’t in the band so it was band without him, and I don’t know . . . I was going crazy trying to figure that out and I wanted to ask you, but I didn’t because I didn’t want to sound silly, but hoorah! It’s not Zacky! haha I must sound like a fool now. Oh well. I am pretty foolish.
That said, awesome chapter!
I'm so excited for Nicholas!!!!
Don’t get me wrong, I love Matt, but I just . . . if I had to choose between Matt and a man that looks like Nicholas, I would just go for Nicholas, because he just oozes sexuality and confidence and there’s an accent ( I know Nicholas doesn’t have an accent, but in my mind he does haha). Onto the next chapter! :)

Ohhh that was definitely hot! And not to be hating on Matt but it seems that both Kari and Nicholas go so well each other. I mean Kari is still new but with Nicholas's help and attention she could learn so much about that world and more about herself that she hasn't already. Maybe it's fate that they bot meant because it would show that Mat made a huge mistake doing that to her and realize that he doesn't just love her a like a friend as he claims to be. I can't wait for the next update!

Loved it!

So hot!!!!

This sounds like a promising story. So looking forward to another update. I hope Nicholas stays the way he is and doesn't become some psycho Dom. That would be all bad. I honestly thought Master V was Zacky, since you had said that Matt was Master S. Yeah, I heart that man too much...haha. Anyways, loved this. Update soon!!!