August 9th, 2013 at 06:31am
She's Hiding Something... - Comments
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Is Chris Jealous? I think he might be....July 2nd, 2013 at 06:13am
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Good update! I love the story & I wonder why Chris is acting like that & what the guys as a whole thin of her! This should be good!February 7th, 2013 at 02:42am
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It is really good story idea, I enjoy the mood swings in it, instead of it being one big happy story there is darkness and there are low periods. It is written fairly well and the supernatural ideas seem to compliment it, in a none stereo-typical way. So I lobe the story can't wait for an update!January 28th, 2013 at 10:32pm
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Omg yay updates! Haha I love this, I hope liz can survive!January 24th, 2013 at 10:16pm
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Awesome update! I just hope they find a way for Liz to survive!January 24th, 2013 at 01:09am
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@ Soullust
@ cr3ature_
Y'all are both right. Yes, I said y'all, dont expect it to happen again. But anyway, since neither if you were completely correct but together your answers make it right, you both win! Message me sometime and I can put you in the story! Until next time. -Marsi xJanuary 23rd, 2013 at 08:00am -
..Is Liz bout to sprout wings and fly?!< Thats my guess lol You are doing a fab job on this story. The plot is really different. When you first foreshadowed a more supernatural aspect I was concerned. I was unprepared to fall in love with both what I thought was the orginal plot as well as the actual plot! Great job!January 23rd, 2013 at 04:26am
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..Is Liz bout to sprout wings and fly?!< Thats my guess lol You are doing a fab job on this story. The plot is really different. When you first foreshadowed a more supernatural aspect I was concerned. I was unprepared to fall in love with both what I thought was the orginal plot as well as the actual plot! Great job!January 23rd, 2013 at 04:25am
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Oooooooo! I can't wait to find out what Liz is... Great update! Update soon pleaseJanuary 23rd, 2013 at 01:13am
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I loved it! Could she possibly be a demon baby? Hmm that's the best I got! But update soon!January 23rd, 2013 at 12:50am
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The tension chapter 10 is awesome and I love the idea of blood baby's, it was a twist I didn't see coming! :)January 22nd, 2013 at 11:20pm
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just read all eight chapters and i love it. they really fell for eachother fast and you should introduce Megan to MIW as well as Annabeth real soon! but all in all, really good story. i can't wait for more updates.January 22nd, 2013 at 05:22am
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@ TheRockshowChick
The image of Angelo holding a little girl on his shoulders and playing with her just makes me want to find a unicorn with bacon wings and fly it to Candyland so I can drown in chocolate sauce and marshmallow fluff. Just sayin'.January 20th, 2013 at 09:55am -
Awh I can imagine Angelo being a daddy :)January 18th, 2013 at 10:44pm
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@ RanieHBS
@ keyboards
I'm tying your ideas together, next chapter here we come!January 17th, 2013 at 05:55pm -
I think you should make Liz something.. like maybe..oh I don't know. I also yhinl you should slowly bring in the rest of the boys. :)that's all I can yhink of. I love this story. Its hard for criticism with this story.January 16th, 2013 at 10:52pm
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@ keyboards
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I think something bad should happen in the next chapter, just and idea idk:sJanuary 16th, 2013 at 09:59pm
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@ RanieHBS
Just for youJanuary 16th, 2013 at 05:15pm
@ ItWasn'tMe
Omg I haven't been here in ages. XD I never realized that I described Ricky as Chris god I feel stupid. Basically it's Ricky who scowled, not Chris haha.