The Person I Hate. - Comments

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@ Unexpected.
thank you :D and yes i know, it's because i write like a manic and usually don't stop to check such things but i will run through the next chapter before i uploaded it :)

Ooh, subscribed and I can't wait! (:
The only thing I really notice is your spelling and grammar is a bit off. It doesn't render the story or make it impossible to read, its hardly noticeable, I just thought I would say. If you proof read or maybe run it through a word check it'd all be fixed.
But anyway I love Dom/fertile stories, and most of them are fanfiction, so when I find an original it's like a rare jem! So keep this up (: