@ fallen_angel94 Why thank you darling! That really means a lot to me. Really? Thank you for bringing that to my attention. I will go fix it when I am able too.
Love the LOTR series and I love this story can't wait to read the sequel when I'm done with this story. I just want to let you know that 2 of your chapters are out of order you need to switch chapters 10 and 11.
This is a good start but it would be less confusing if you started a new paragraph when a different character spoke. It gets confusing trying to sort out when Annliese is speaking and when someone else starts.
Why thank you darling! That really means a lot to me.
Really? Thank you for bringing that to my attention.
I will go fix it when I am able too.