Infamy - Comments

this is a great story. very sad ending but it was well written and had a great meaning to it.

I read it again just because... it's still wonderful. :arms:

Edit: So many typos in my first comment on this... ew... it won't even let me edit it.

my god..a war sory and a ferard mixed togeteher
gotta love it
fucking love you
brilliant writer!
:arms: we hail you hehe

This is one of The Best one-shots I have ever read. I must say I like it better than the other one [five point blank]. There are so many things I liked aboutt his but I'll only mention a few.

First, I loved the honesty of it. The way Frank and Gerard had to hide averything from everybody. How Frank was so apprehensive during the "shower scene" and Gerard didn't care. It was like He [frank] wanted to do Gerard but he was afraid. It's hard to explain, but it was super honest. That's the only way to put it.

Second, The whole attacking section was simply amazing. It felt so real, the way you described it. It felt like it was happening so fast, yet the way you wrote it didn't make it seem rushed. It was faced paced, but not rushed. simply beautiful. I have no idea how you did that.

Then there's the scene when Frank get's shot. I already knew he was going to die, because you made it known earlier in the story but for some reason you had me hoping he would make it. Kind of like how I think Gerard would have felt. He knew it was over, but he was giving himself false hope. He was kind of hoping for a miricale. At least I think he was.

And the ending. The doctor was a great character too. Even though his part was small I loved how he was honest. In most one-shots like this the writers make the docotors compassionate and all that jazz. They weren't if there was no hope they weren't going to keep trying. I liked that you stayed true to that small fact.

The last line made me smile, in a sad yet happy way. Frank will be proud of me, I think. I promised him that I’d fight for our country, but I’m going the extra mile. I’m dying for it.

That line made me cry. Not like sobbing tears but the silent kind that come when you in a sad/happy fate. It was the perfect ending to a perfect one-shot. This is very easily one of my favorites.

Ahhh I absolutely love yor writing. I love it and I love you. It's simply amazing.

*jaw drops*
*is speechless*

that's so sad! WHAT IS WITH YOU AND THESE ONE-SHOTS?!
god!

it was so beautiful...i smiled... and then just stared in horror.. i was so hopeful when they made it out! then i wasn't... gah.

:)

That Was Fricking Beautiful!

I Swear, I've Never Read Anything That Amazing In My Life.

Yoo Made Me CRY!!!

Amazing.

xxx

I loved it so much!
It was beautiful in a sad way.
Honestly one of the best stories I ever read.

this was amazing. i also thought of Titanic. i cry for that movie every time and i cried for this story too. it's really well written and elegant and...absolutely lovely.

this is beautiful, and a great frerard and war story. i love this well done x

wow, this was so amazing! it was like...titanic-esque, which is a good thing, because i loved the plot to that movie IMMENSELY!!!

many kudos, keep on writing! you rock!

<333
Caity

that was so perfect!

i always wanted to write a war story...i love war movies! and i love frerards! but man, a war story frerard?!

awesome...

the ending was awesome too. i loved it! but poor frankie...

it was so sad but perfect in a twisted kinda way.

it was awesome as fuck and i really want more but if i get more it might ruin the story so i wont want ne

ok?

yea

but it kicked japenese ass!!!!!!!! haha and guess whos next?

Normandy. yeah those fuckers r goign DOWN! we know we beat them! haha

awww Erikaaaa
it made me sad ='[
Bravaaaa

Oh my gosh...
and I'm listening to Demolition Lovers...
Wow
*Btw, the text is black, so, you might want to change it. Just saying.*

This is very well written. And it made me quite sad .