@ early graves. Thanks for the short comment and as for the story fitting with the topic. It had a slash. You didn't emphasize the amount of slash that had to be involved. So...It kind of does fit with the topic.
The layout is very cool. Haha, but I think the story had too much dialog and you need to develop the doctor's thoughts more. Also, it didn't really fit in with the topic you submitted this under. Overall a fun read. Thanks for joining!
Thanks for the comment. :D I'm glad you enjoyed it!