Desire of the Soul - Comments

This was a really beautiful piece! The short chapters made it quick to read, but even in its small length, it has more of a message than most stories! This whole thing was briliiant and I am just so jealous of your writing style! You have a way with words, that's for sure!

Very good message, it's important not to be obsessive. Your world does need a center, but it certainly doesn't need to be one person.

And you don't need to be stuck, for that would truly suck. We are self-reflecting people, we have questions and we can get answers.

Indeed beautiful, I really loved this one :)

Magnifique! Do good in the contest, and keep writing!

Wow

Beautiful.

I really loved the simplicity of the story yet it still had a lot of depth even with the short entries. I also love stories like this, where it end sadly. Tragedy is rather thought provoking, at the end I wondered how many Rosalinda's there are in the world. I lingered afterward and a good story tends to do that to readers. Well written work, dear. ^^

This story just came up so fast -so many events happened and I couldn't sink it all in my brain. This story is very, very good and I was hoping you could update soon? :-)

Oh my. I like this story.. I must know more. Update soon! Please!