That Night - Comments

Comment swap brought me here.
I'm not a fan of One Direction so I'm not really a fan of the story, but your writing and layout are really good. I did really like her friend because if my friend had got a ride home from a band member I liked and then I called her phone only to fined out that it was a band member I would react in the same way.
I hae no idea what to write about... or of this is even enough for comment swap so I'll ramble for a bit.
I found it really weird that she got into the car with someone he didn't know... seemed kinda stupid to me but I did that once while drunk so I can't rally judge (at least she was sober) - (luckily for me it was a woman driver).
I'm gonna say this is enough so I'll be going now.
Again, good writing and keep up the good work.
Bye!

I wasn't too sure if I gave advice... I think you could take things slower and take time to describe your characters more. There isn't an equal balance between dialogue and descriptors. It isn't always necessary it be even but in this case there isn't a lot of details (: I tend to put too much dialogue so just something to look out for. Write on, love.

@ xXrawr_cookiesxX

I suggest Jason's Game. ;)

@ XxChErRyCOkexX
Thanks and don't worry I wont. for some odd reason im very cocky about my stories which I hate! but I will read one of your stories and comment back :)

I was goind to keep reading... Then saw it was 1D. :/ It's a very nice story! I just can't stand them... Lol. I knew the second I hit "fanfiction" I'd be 1D. (Comment swap)

But anyways, I really liked it. Don't get discouraged at all just because I'm a wenie. (: Good luck, dear reader!

@ MadamnnnMisfortune
im going to go fix that now. lol thanks

I like the plot of your story(: it's creative and effective. I will definitely be subscribing and recommending. For advice there is a typeo on your summary page. "Money" :D write on, love.

I like the plot of your story(: it's creative and effective. I will definitely be subscribing and recommending. For advice there is a typeo on your summary page. "Money" :D write on, love.