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  • Moriarty;

    Moriarty; (250)

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    That was not only super sweet, but it was really intense as well! Like Brian coming out of prison after murdering all those people and then the pair of them getting together again and her forgiving him for everything that he did- even if he did kill a couple of people. This one is inspiring me actually- I'm very excited! I loved it as always- you are a wonderful writer!
    March 9th, 2013 at 01:10pm
  • heretic.

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    SO good! Phew!
    February 12th, 2013 at 01:46am
  • teenstar

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    It was a really good one-shot because it was long and it has a plot in it; it's not just a smut with no meaning. I totally agree with BeenDownThatRoad Very Happy
    January 7th, 2013 at 10:02am
  • BeenDownThatRoad

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    I really liked your story line, it was different, which is really good! Fan fics can get pretty monotinous sometimes. I love Brian and I just overall really enjoyed this! Their sexy time was really hot too, good job:)
    January 7th, 2013 at 03:50am
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