Bite My Tongue - Comments

asdfghjkl; I can't even, god this is perf

Fjkftlveylftlvwwiøkægseu this is perfect

this is so fucking adorable can I just

yayyyy!!!!!!!!!!! Cuttte

VICTORIOUS!(: i Loved that chapter soo much! It was fantastical! I am so happy that they confessed to each other and now things can start getting spicy(;

I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOOOOOOOVE THIS UPDATE! And just as your A/N said YAY FOR GAY FLUFF it was so cute and kinda hot until OLI fell asleep then it became cute. Any way I really like this story ok bye

NEXTCHAPTERNEXTCHAPTERNEXTCHAPTER. PLEASE. So perf that i cannot even....
This is amazing so far! :)
please update soon!! <3

OHHMYYYGOOODD! That was insane! New subscriber right here! That was epic! I wish it would go in Oli's point of view every now and again! But i love it how it is now too soo(: Keep up the awesomeoness!

OHHMYYYGOOODD! That was insane! New subscriber right here! That was epic! I wish it would go in Oli's point of view every now and again! But i love it how it is now too soo(: Keep up the awesomeoness!

WHAT WHAT?!?! THEY KISSED OH M GEEEEE FANGIRLLLLLLLLLLL!

OMG FEELS.
It was perfect ok.

start writing ok

GFSDJKLJSDFKL;GJ
imm ony the pohone with you
and y
ou needto stop it ok
wow
update soon
ugh
i will go over to your house and like
force you to update
ugh

GFSDJKLJSDFKL;GJ
imm ony the pohone with you
and y
ou needto stop it ok
wow
update soon
ugh
i will go over to your house and like
force you to update
ugh

I love the story so far, you're a great writer! I can't wait for the rest of the story, please don't quit on it.

This is really good can't wait for the next chapter :)

Thank you for the fast update, it wasn't shitty I loved it ok <3

HI I LOVE YOIU YEP STOP TEASING MEEE

A new Fransykes. Please don't break my heart and stop writing, ok? I really liked the first chapter <3 :D