I Don't Want the World to See Me - Comments

@ BlueDreams
Some girls live in that fairy tale and there is nothing wrong with wanting that kind of ending. She has a positive outlook but with someone like Tom that fairy tale needs to alter to fit him into it.

@ teenagedream91
Which is good. Clara needs to step out of that fairytale she lived as a girl. Nothing is easy anymore but everything is always worth fighting for.

@ BlueDreams
True. That image is broken

@ teenagedream91
Especially given the fact that Clara had this perfect image of Tom and it's not true, it never was.

@ BlueDreams
I understand. Letting someone in and admitting that you have a problem to them is a huge deal. It's not something you walk up to a random person and sharing your life story with them. It's intimate and share that bond of trust you have with them and Clara has that already.
It is time for them to move on to see what would be better or worse for them. No use in pondering in the past

@ teenagedream91
Exactly and that was why he was slightly freaking out at the bar. He's still pretty sensitive to everything, except to Clara. He knows she won't use him, abuse him and so on. He feels safe with her.
Hahaha thank you! And yessss! It was just about time they did, so things can move on for better or for worse ;)

Aww Tom. I just want to hug him for all that he went through. I mean it's tough going through stuff like that and it's more common for actors or someone with a high demanding job to become addicted to what soothes them. And when their bodies become accostume you know it's trouble when they head down that lane.

This chapter was simply just romantic and I gushed so hard XD Clara was simply adorable asking Tom and how they interact with each other was just magical. I do feel bad for Clara having all that weight on her shoulders, her nana not getting better and medical bills piling up and such. It's a stressful time. Also they confessed to one another XD Yay!

@ teenagedream91
Hahaha that's okay darling. I am writing Tom and Paty right now actually eheh

@ BlueDreams
I know how you feel. Sometimes you need to take breaks in order to get into the mood again :) we will see how it goes with Tom and Clara. I was so close to writing Paty lol

@ teenagedream91
Oh love, I understand! It takes me ages to get in the mood to write updates for this story.
And yes, Clara is finally standing up to herself. Tom isn't directly 'playing' with her but he has in the past done it without intentions and who knows what can happen now?

Ugh I am so sorry it has taken me this long! I probably deleted the notification for this XD
Anyways it was good that Clara got it out in the open why she was so upset. With her shy nature she does need to project herself more and tell him how she felt. It sure gave Tom a surprise to see that it did affect her when he left to London. He has a lot of thinking to do after what has transpired and I am so excited to see what happens next. Clara is just a wonderful character and different from the others. She's a complete doll and slowly coming out of her shell, hopefully.

@ berghain sunrise
Hello :D
Oh thank you so much for your kind words, they mean a lot. Believe me! You are indeed very kind and I am so happy to know that you like the story.
I'll update as soon as I can!

I love this story, your writing is so great! I appreaciate the fact that there's all this tension going on and that you're taking your time (re)building Clara and Tom's relationship -this and the fact that I can picture Clara as the sort of girl Tom would go for in real life makes it all even more believable for me. I'm enjoying a lot reading your work and I'm so glad you finally updated, please keep it going!

@ eleanor lyra jones
Awwww, thank you so much :D
That means a lot, thank you!

really really good story and great writting skills

@ BlueDreams
That's true

@ teenagedream91
I know, that's a bit what I want to focus on. The fact that sometimes people don't move on.

@ BlueDreams
Maybe. It's hard to move on from it

@ teenagedream91
I know, you never really forget it but you can move on from it. Apparently, these two might not have eheh
You'll find that out through his thoughts :)

@ BlueDreams
You have a point. You never forget your first love. It's th first time you experience something that pure and I doubt they ever got over each other or Tom didn't. I just wonder if he thought about Clara when he was with his ex