I Don't Want the World to See Me - Comments

@ teenagedream91
I have about 7 chapters left to write, in order to finish on Chapter 15 but there's just a few key points left.

@ BlueDreams
It's pretty close if it is ending at chapter 15 or unless you meant you have 15 more chapters to go then yes it's a little ahead.

@ teenagedream91
Yes, it's not really that close to the end yet but it won't be as long as SWIB

@ BlueDreams
I know you know haha. Okay so it is going to be a short story.

@ teenagedream91
It is going to be short. I'm not planning to go past Chapter 15 so.
I feel really sorry for Tony too, actually. It's so unfair.
And well, Tom can fine too haha We don't know yet well... I do xD

Is this going to be a short story? Sounded like it is in your A/N. I fel bad for tony we all have been there. Watching someone you like be with someone else and we all tell ourselves as long as their happy it's alright but it still hurts. Tom getting back in the gem why do I feel like he might skip back to old habits and lose Clara? Or something happening that has him revert to his old ways? So many ways to write this XD can't wait

yay!!!

@ ohhnoosui
Hello dear!
As I think you'll understand, I am trying to get back to this story. I read it all over again yesterday, got my ideas in place and I'll start working on a chapter tonight. I hope to finish it soon as well.

Please finish this one..

@ BlueDreams
I can't wait for the surprise.

@ teenagedream91
You'll see and it might surprise you.

@ BlueDreams
Yeah let's see. Clara and Tom are opening up to one another and it can go downhill at some point. What will they be? I have no clue lol

@ teenagedream91
Hahaha that's true!
Clara is finally opening up and she's making an effort for it.
That's true, let's see what Tony does honestly.

@ BlueDreams
No one can resist a little drama ;)
Tom is utterly adorable. Be could be doing and saying nothing and still be adorable enough to hug. He's just that lovable. Damn him lol
It does come as a shock when you try to have someone open up to you and to see someone do it so easily it could make anyone jealous or wonder if something is wrong with them. Happens to me sometimes even if we are just friends.
It was clever :) Clara wasnt as nervous as she usually is which must be refreshing to see and hear.
He may be a nice guy but even nice guys don't silently root for two people to break up or think of a different scenario of him being the person and not Tom. Love can make you do crazy things haha

@ teenagedream91
Yes, drama is coming along. You know me, I can't resist it haha
Wasn't he just so cute? And she's finally managing to be more herself and more free around the person she loves.
Tony's position is a bit hard. That hurt him for real because Clara never was really herself with him and then Tom returns and BOOM it just happened. He's a bit surprised, he never really thought that Tom would return or that Clara would open up to someone so easily.
They did kind of dance. Tom had always wanted to do it but since he was embracing her, he was happy already. Hahaha I thought it was a funny way for Clara to do it without her nerves being the problem this time ;) Awwww, thank you darling!
I'd say that Tony is a good guy most of the time so he won't try to break them off just for his own advantage, however, he does worry. So Clara is ahead for a bit of tough love eventually.

Draaaamaaaa! haha It was so adorable that Tom picked roses for her when he was younger, but got reprimanded for it. It was a cute gesture like Clara said. They are an adorable couple and she is so easy going now that she has her walls down. I do have to say that I feel bad for Tony because we all know what that feels like to like someone and see that person being the real them with someone else. What a killer XD
I almost died when Clara and Tom danced in the rain and she told him she wanted to be his girlfriend and she sneezed haha genius. You always have a knack for writing such romantic and silly ways of two people falling in love and such.
I don't think Tony would convince her to dump Tom for him, I think he will stand in the sidelines maybe be there when it all falls apart and sweep her off her feet. Possibly doing so in the most sneaky of ways if he is really persistent with her.

@ Disa616
Hello :D
Thank you so much for your words, I feel so flattered :)

Such a Lovely story, can't wait to see what happens. It really makes the reader feel fo the characters

@ BlueDreams
They definitely can and I can't wait to see what happens next

@ teenagedream91
Exactly and he does want to fit in. Now that they both finally confessed things can move towards a relationship.