I just have to express how much I love this. I love that girl-with-a-dark-past time thing. It's really great, Tabby! And you select the cutest outfits for it! You have some great style. :D
Comment Swap. I really like your story, your imagery in this is remarkable, it has a great flow and kept me reading. Only a few errors, I found...a few commas needed so there won't be run-on sentences. I'm so glad that you spaced out your story. It's something that would look ridiculous in a real book, but seems necessary when reading anything on mibba. Otherwise it just looks clumped together and that's not eye boggling what-so-ever! This story would look really cute with a layout and a banner but that's just my POV. or opinion. Good job on this story!
Loving this! I can't wait to start on my jeremy story again. i hate only havibg an ipod to get online with. :-( I started it when there was nothibg but a couple one shots vased off his viagra mishap and one or two hawkeye fan fics. Haha. anyway, you're not moving too fast at all. i think its the perfect pace. especially when others want shit to happen so badly as well. hahah. keep it up! Its great!
Oh my gosh! I love these last two chapters so much :) Oh and I greatly admire your taste in music, if you're truly a fan of Motley Crue and the song More Than Words