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@ XTeamSammiX
Yeah, Now I think about it, I should have given them names like bob and Jimmy or something like that.

I really like seeing the characters develop in the story. They came from different backgrounds and have unique stories, which are amazing.

At first I thought it was Edwin arguing with a friend,but then when you said it was two different kids an =d I was like "Oh the kid was like 12" *facepalms* "I'm an idiot." It was good, a little wordy, but I could figure it out.

I almost cried. I feel so sorry for Edwin. I want to hug him so bad and tell him it will be all right.

@ XTeamSammiX
Thank you, I'm actually really enjoying writing it as well so I will try to update soon!

Found this last night, and I think the story is quite amazing. It has originality and a spark to it that makes you want to keep reading. Looking forward to more.

Wow. We are really close in age (not to be stalker-ish). I couldn't come up with that. Amazing!

@ Izzywhispering
I'm 14 :)

this is amazing. how old are you? you have a unique talent.

You're welcome :-) and I hope to see more chapters, I like the story it has a unique plot to it. An interesting one for sure.

Take care,

~Red~

I great beginning, hope you continue with it for sure.

@ graphicromantics
thank you :)

This is great!

I like the originality in this story and I can't wait for the rest of the plot to unfold.