My Love Is the Sea - Comments

  • ReineDeVampire

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    Wow, in such a small amount of words, the start of this story was so deep! I really enjoyed it. I know this is from 2 years ago, so chances are it is long since abandoned, but if you happen to see this comment and it inspires you to look back on this story, I really would love to read more.
    July 18th, 2015 at 02:29pm
  • Mary-Alice White

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    Thank you so much! I'm not sure if I'm going to continue with this or not. But thank you!
    May 27th, 2013 at 08:13pm
  • M. Evelyn

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    Hi! I’m writing this comment for comment swap! I thought it would be a really good idea since I would really enjoy more comments on my story, Keeping You a Secret. So, let me tell you what I think of your story! It’s practically flawless. I see very little errors such as grammar mistakes or spelling mistakes. Your layout is what really drew me to the story. It made me interested to find out what this story was about and what would happen during the plot. Anyway, your story is really good and you should continue writing!
    May 27th, 2013 at 07:14pm
  • Halloweenlover

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    Wow! This was a wicked start! I loved it! You write very well and I enjoyed reading this. I could feel your character's agony, her doubt, and fears. Keep on going because I honestly love it! Nice title by the way. Oh and I recommended this and subscribed in case your wondering. :)
    January 6th, 2013 at 07:24am