Give Me Love - Comments

@ Ree Howerton
Thank you! I'm glad you like it!

I love this story. Usually I find myself getting bored with one several chapters in, but this one has my full attention.

loved it!!

Totes in love with this story!

GAHHHHHHHHHH!!! I can't deal!

I love it. Please, post the next chapter soon. (:

Ah I just can't wait for them to get together.

Law and Order

@ vaashappenin
Thanks! : ) should have the next one out in a couple of days!

I love it! Update soon please !

I hope you find your laptop that's absolutely terrible i'm so sorry

@ iWearConverse
Thank you! I'm glad you like it! : )

I'm torn between Harry and Zayn. Ugh Harry is so cute and sweet but her and Zayn have history just ugh. I love this story haha

@ BellaJonas
Welcome! I'm so glad you found my comment helpful. :'D I think it's really responsible of you to be practicing your writing, it will only make you an even better author. So, yay for you and the future! *high-five*

Oh, my DAYS. I also have the habit of posting my chapters without proof-reading beforehand. I should also be careful!

@ DarkMystique
Thank you for all of that! I haven't gotten any comments like this before! I'm using fan-fiction to practicing my writing so its nice to hear that I'm doing well with it! I'm terrible with punctuation and I don't do too much editing before I post the chapters, a bad habit I should get out of, so I kind of just expect to have punctuation mistakes. Thank you again! : )

I love the banner so much. I think it's beautiful and works very well for the story. The layout itself, I think, could be improved. My eyes felt strained because the text seemed to be fading with the background, if that makes any sense. It was hard for me to focus on the words because - for me - the background image was still too "out-there" for me. Sorry.

On the other hand, your paragraphs were set out neatly and tidily, which I was so thankful.

I don't usually read fan-fiction, but I think you've done a wonderful job writing this. You certainly have talent, because you also haven't made grammar mistakes and I didn't find any spelling mistakes so far. So well done!

Last 6th paragraph, 3rd sentence: "Alone in his room(comma) Zayne brought out his contraband(comma) finding an old cigar box he had hidden in the back of his closet(full-stop)"

I found a few punctuation mistakes, which isn't a big deal, I mean, even I make more mistakes, but I have a lot of time on my hands so I thought to point it out to you anyway.

I think you've done a very good job though! I wish you the very best and hope you have a wonderful day! (I'm sorry if you minded on some of my comments, I was just wanting to be honest/clear. Hope you don't mind. :) Take care.)

Amazing! Need more, so update soon pleaseee! :D

@ prettypsyche
That's what I was going for I just hadn't quit figured out where I was going with it. At first it was going to be that they were just busy but now I have a better plan for this! If it all works out the way I want it to!

It's just that they both refuse to go into what their falling out was all about when Harry inquires. And Zayn went on the coke bender to end all coke benders after seeing her. It can't simply be that they got too busy.

@ prettypsyche
I'll be honest with you I hadn't had anything really deep planed for them until after your last comment! So thanks for making me think! : )