Of Lust, Passion, and the Thievery of Innocence - Comments

@ lizzicleromance
aww thanks! and that is really funny haha

So. Funny thing I wanted to mention, when we were discussing perfect stories and oneshots last night, I thought of this one. And I was like, today, when I'm at work, I'm going to look it up, so I can make sure to let her know that she positively must read that one because it's perfect.

...silly me, you wrote this! It's def my fave sexy oneshot everrr

Oh my god wow

Hotness

E v e r y w h e r e

This was fab. And left me wanting more ='D

Can we just pause for a moment please and rejoice because of how AMAZING this story is!?!?! MY GOD. This was the epitome of a sexy oneshot. It had passion, lust, and it was simply GORGEOUS. Your way with words is simply stunning. I loved every moment of this, it was witty, and sexy, and perfect. YES.

Soooooo hot omg

I was stalking your profile and I decided to read this and it was awesome :D I loved it so so so so much! Haha it was cute and I loved Frankie's character!

@ ShotToRemember
Lol it's cool. You really shouldn't think about quitting writing:) one shots or whatever it may be. Your stories/entires are brilliant. Honestly.

@ Vast_Venom
Oh my god, your comment makes my life:D Thank you so much! I love you haha! I honestly didn't even know this had funny parts though haha.. or remember them ha! anyways thank so much for commenting and i'm really glad you liked it!!

That.... was awesome. I read this during class and when I'd laugh at the funny parts people would stare. The diction and syntax in this was great. Favorite one-shot

This just made my day. Totally made me forget that it was monday and the fact I am in class and could have gotten caught reading this since anyone could look over my shoulder. Loving this so much.

Love,
RedRomRomance

oh my gosh. I'm speechless at how amazing this is :]

Oh I'm with RayTorosArmy . . . It was rather girl boner enabling! =D

this was so great

@ RayTorosArmy
Thank you so much! And yeah, I'm working on the layout right now and it's majorly pissing me off:( And I'll check out the italic stuff too, see what I can fix.

You need to change the layout, it makes it impossible to read. But as far as writing goes, I think the things you wanted to be italic didn't work out either. Um, your writing of smut was awesome (girl boner enabling, actually) and your description was good. I really liked it, good job. Xox