The first chapter of this story was really incredible. It gave me chills and was written so well and in a great detail. The way you flowed from that introduction to your next chapter is well done, and i like that you maintain this air of mystery throughout the story so far. Occasionally the grammar is not perfect but overall this story is really good and I enjoyed reading it so far:) I think I will subscribe to see how the rest of the story turns out as it has potential
July 4th, 2014 at 02:09pm