It's Been a While Since I've Felt Butterflies - Comments

@ Loor
Awe, thank you!

This is adorableness! It's such an easy read, it flows really well. It isn't spectacular or a big adventure, but it's still a very nice read.
I checked out the contest and I think you did a really good job on incorporating both the song and the picture into the story. Good luck in the contest!

@ JackWills.
Thank you!(:
I really like this story too. Maybe one day I'll make a story about it ^.^

I really loved the story! Fred made my heart swoon! I would love to know more about the characters! I feel like you went into some detail about the two characters relationship and you left out the perfect amount to keep the reader curious. I also really liked how you still tied other Harry Potter character back into the story like the Fat Lady, George, and Filch.

Great job and good luck!