October 2nd, 2014 at 06:14pm
This is weird...strange...bizarre. It just sets me on edge, but at the same time it feels foolish to me. It doesn't make me want to read more, as it just doesn't grab me.
Children wouldn't know a real smile from a fake smile, at least I don't think they would. They're innocent like that.
Although this story isn't normal, so...
I don't know, it's just puts a bitter taste in my mouth and I can't swallow it. I'm sorry.
No it's OK. You're just giving constructive criticism. I understand not everyone likes the same things.