Finding John - Comments

I loved the rewrite. I did see a typo in one of the flashbacks, but this story just leaves me with so many feelings (you know this already though). It's sad but sweet, and it leaves the reader with hope that it gets better. This is just so beautiful Katelyn.

That was really great. Don't know why there were no comments...
Only thing that bugged me was the timing of the first week. I couldn't believe when it was the one week anniversary becuase it felt like it should be so much longer, too much happened.
Overall, beautiful and touching :)