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  • SingAlong

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    Also, not to be picky but this line, “Was you wanting to quit or something?”, would be more grammatically correct if "was" was changed to either "were" or (the best option) "did"

    But I love the story as I mentioned before!!!!!!!!!!!
    January 8th, 2013 at 02:43pm
  • SingAlong

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    Loving this so far. Hope you update soon, I would love to see more of what happens.
    January 8th, 2013 at 02:40pm
  • fiction246

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    Practice.....I like it haha
    January 8th, 2013 at 01:38pm
  • Austin Ashby

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    Ooh, exciting new story. Update soon, I'd love to see more ^ - ^!
    January 8th, 2013 at 05:09am
  • Xxzackysangel6661Xx

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    I'm liking this so far. Can't wait to read more :)
    January 8th, 2013 at 03:50am
  • sevenfoldfoREVer1666

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    Wow... your all great writer... Its really good.. cant wait for another update... <3
    January 8th, 2013 at 03:26am
  • Synful Cocktail

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    @ Synyster Gates;
    OOOH. Pick me!
    January 8th, 2013 at 03:13am
  • Synyster Gates;

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    @ Synful Cocktail
    Another writer, to do Matt's part. :)
    January 8th, 2013 at 03:11am
  • Synful Cocktail

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    MMMMM ME GUSTA. But what does it mean by Matt; Open! ?
    January 8th, 2013 at 03:06am
  • StacieIerogeance

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    I love it! I wissh I could have read more of matt turining sub to brian but ic ant wait
    January 8th, 2013 at 02:52am
  • fiction246

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    loving this so far, cant wait for more!! i love me a little Bratt but when you make it Brattacky *faints*
    January 8th, 2013 at 12:40am
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