Taste of Chaos - Comments

Really great story. My heart goes out to the family that lost their son. I hope you update soon :) I think it will be hard to write a good and realistic story with teens handling grief because most can't but you've done really well thus far and I look forward to seeing the next step

I really like this story. I think the way that you write is amazing. I love that it's not the common plot, that it's different. I really like that. I hope you update soon.

awwwwwww that was so sad i cried and to read the note at the end made it even sadder, i can't wait for you to write another chapter because this is really good

So yeah. A month and you haven't updated this master piece? And there's only THREE chapters? I WANT MOREEEEE. Please? I love you. And I love this. And you should write. write write write!

WHAT. You said you weren't going to kill anyone and now I am crying. Poor, poor Owen, losing one of his best friends and band members, something that Matt knows all too well and I know hoped his son would never experience. I know what it's like to lose a best friend; I wouldn't wish that pain on anyone. And poor Abbie. I had wondered, because of last chapter, if she was pregnant but I thought I'd keep it to myself. Poor girl. Poor boys. And now I'm wondering where Jimmy's been. Owen needs him. Love this chapter <3

Also, I'm sorry to hear about what happened at the school near you <3

That was so sad. Owen is repeating history of what his father went through with the loss of Jimmy. I don't think there are words to descibe how it feels to lose someome so close to you unless you have experienced it yourself. I wonder where had Jimmy gone and why hasn't he been speaking to Owen ever since Mark had passed.

Oh gosh. I cried so much. The feeling of loosing your best friend. I relate. Poor matt. Poor owen.

Wow. This chapter was really sad for obvious reasons. That's really awful about the kid an hour from you:( I dunno what more to say... I love your writing. I wonder why Jimmy hasn't made an appearance through his grieving? You'd think that would be when he was there even more? Update soon

This story is so.... Impactful? Is that even a word? I dunno, I just love it though! The end with Matt talking in the livingroom broke my heart a little and all of the Jimmy stuff, especially that last line, really gets me. There's so much emotion. Im in love with this, seriously! Update soon

The ending of this chapter made me so sad; for Matt, because he talks to Jimmy and thinks he's a shitty dad, and for Jimmy because he can't answer Matt. I don't want any of them to fight! I do get why Matt and Violet were so worried they lyrics though. On another note, I do love that Owen's such a good friend, thinking about Abbie and her sleeping habits. I wonder if she's okay. Loved this! <3

Oh my god, I love this story so much, it's so unique and beautiful.

I loved it

Chapter one, woohoo! This was brilliant. The interview was absolutely perfect, and so realistic...like I could picture it all in my head. I laughed so hard when Zacky talked about his son. He would make a comment about him having his mother's taste in men, the goof. And the golf comment and the one on one basketball with Owen, yes! That's what I'm talking about =D I was totally not expecting Owen and be able to see/talk to Jimmy. That's just...wow. I have no words for that. I love this, so much. I can't wait for more! <3

Awe, Owen sees Jimmy. This is absoutley amazing so far, and I can't wait for the rest!

Ok, totally didn't see that coming at the end! I'm so f*cking stoked for this!!! Great concept, great writing, I can't wait for more!!!! Oh, and I loved how the guys all described their kids and the comedy. I can totally picture them older and sitting around like that! Man, could you imagine being 'visited' by Jimmy like that? Umph. I will always love that crazy man.

im so excited for this!!!! and how cute that he still calls owen ducky!!!! :)

im so excited for this!!!! and how cute that he still calls owen ducky!!!! :)

im so excited for this!!!! and how cute that he still calls owen ducky!!!! :)

AWWW YEAH! So excited for this already! <3