@ TheyCallMeHeyHay Sorry! I wrote this on my iPod ;( and the small keyboard and big thumbs really dont help. But thanks anyways, and thank you for letting me know this things, the person who writes it doesnt see the mistakes and it always helps someone else to proof read it~ <3
This story is good! The only problem I saw with it was towards the end, "the dak began to swallow" I'm not sure what you mean, but I think you typo'd dark? Anyways, also try using indent paragraphs? But I like this and will subscribe. :)
Sorry! I wrote this on my iPod ;( and the small keyboard and big thumbs really dont help. But thanks anyways, and thank you for letting me know this things, the person who writes it doesnt see the mistakes and it always helps someone else to proof read it~ <3