I want to really dive deep into this story, but man...the typos (thoughout) and misused words (sense instead of since, well instead of while, etc) are really interrupting the flow of the story for me. If you have access to Microsoft Word (or WordPerfect ,or anything with a grammar/spell checker) it might be helpful to run the chapter through there before posting it 
March 19th, 2013 at 06:45pm
