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shortygirl
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They want her for sex? Lol
I gotta say I wouldn't mind though(I just sounded like a complete whore). By the way you stopped at the best part! :P
Loving it still...
January 13th, 2013 at 07:48am
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@ shortygirl i went look at it and realized i'm going to fix it hopefully
January 10th, 2013 at 05:32pm
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Well I would reconmend writing in paragraphs and leave a space when someone starts talking. Right now its kinda bunched up. Oh and on your cover page for it the backround is gray and so is the text. Makes it hard to read the summary. :)
January 10th, 2013 at 12:45am
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@ shortygirl of course.
January 9th, 2013 at 11:15pm
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I like this so far, but can I offer some constructive criticism?
January 9th, 2013 at 07:35am
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I gotta say I wouldn't mind though(I just sounded like a complete whore). By the way you stopped at the best part! :P
Loving it still...