I like the story so far. I think there's something that can be tweaked by cleaning up tense issues and things like that.
July 15th, 2013 at 06:13am
The Devil's Goddess - Comments
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Oooo love it! My kinda book xDJuly 8th, 2013 at 09:39pm
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Her Sister's Smart . & I Loved Reading It In Carson's P.O.V. Too ! Great Update , Cant Wait For The Next (:January 14th, 2013 at 10:42pm
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Woooo I'm The First To Comment . Oh Yeaaah (; Anyways , I Reallly Like The Story So Far . How Yu Gave Some Info About Carson & The End Of The World , & Then Added Tht In Her P.O.F.
Update Soon Pleaseeee (:January 12th, 2013 at 01:29am
