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  • Kawaii Emotions;

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    I like the story so far. I think there's something that can be tweaked by cleaning up tense issues and things like that.
    July 15th, 2013 at 06:13am
  • LOVE1516

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    Oooo love it! My kinda book xD
    July 8th, 2013 at 09:39pm
  • Morgieee0

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    Her Sister's Smart . & I Loved Reading It In Carson's P.O.V. Too ! Great Update , Cant Wait For The Next (:
    January 14th, 2013 at 10:42pm
  • Morgieee0

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    Woooo I'm The First To Comment . Oh Yeaaah (; Anyways , I Reallly Like The Story So Far . How Yu Gave Some Info About Carson & The End Of The World , & Then Added Tht In Her P.O.F.
    Update Soon Pleaseeee (:
    January 12th, 2013 at 01:29am
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