The Consequence - Comments

You should definitely make this into a story! Everything about the one-shots made me want to keep reading :P.

I think that you should make this into a story. This could be a really good plot and the story would be very interesting. But I loved both of the one-shots.!!

I'm actually glad they both turned their backs on her. She deserved it after what she did. Zack is actually the only real innocent party here, but Brian's only real crime was to fall in love. She should've resisted him and stood by her husband and tried to make her marriage work. Now she has nothing. Brilliant story, excellently written. This would make an excellent longer story. Please think about it :)

Ohhhhh indeed she suffered from the consequences. Now none of them wants her. I think you should write another one-shot as a sequel to this hehe or make a story of it!