Bloodied Art - Comments

Comment swap time!
AHHHHHHHHH so creepy, and messy bloody blood blood stuff lol , this made me cringe but i guess that's a good thing. you write well lol this made my fingers feel weird i let it get to my head, but good job!

CS: The fact that you had a warning for gore kind of made me kinda dread reading this, but i was relived to see that (so far) there isn't any extreme gore (im woss when it comes to things like that) Your description is eye catching and the first chapter, although short was brilliantly written. Keep up the good work!

Oh wow. This was perfect! Honestly though I'm a little annoyed that you were reprimanded for writing something like this. I'm a huge believer in having the freedom to write whatever you want. Others write about incest and rape, you are fine in writing this.

I'm not offended, I was a cutter too, and I felt no trigger to cut again. But really the details, the way this person thought...amazing and very daring. I love you for writing about this. Major kudos to you, Hun!

comment swap brought me here! wow, the description here is beautiful! i think you've done your topic justice, and you've accurately portrayed the pain and anguish that goes into self-harm, and i can feel the desperation in the narrator's voice. bravo, well done. it's also a great mix between action and thought, so great on that too! i'll definitely rec!

comment swap brought me here! wow, the description here is beautiful! i think you've done your topic justice, and you've accurately portrayed the pain and anguish that goes into self-harm, and i can feel the desperation in the narrator's voice. bravo, well done. it's also a great mix between action and thought, so great on that too! i'll definitely rec!

Dear author, I can honestly say this is one of the rare times I fell in love with a sick one-shot like this one. It was detailed to the bone and it grabbed my attention from the first sentence of the summary. Every writer tries his limits by writing different kinds of stuff. If this was your first time writing something like this, then congratulations because this is gold. ~Marian.

Dear author, I can honestly say this is one of the rare times I fell in love with a sick one-shot like this one. It was detailed to the bone and it grabbed my attention from the first sentence of the summary. Every writer tries his limits by writing different kinds of stuff. If this was your first time writing something like this, then congratulations because this is gold. ~Marian.

You picked a very tricky subject to write about- a lot of people could have been offended, or a lot of people could have felt that they related. I like how it was written, but I didn't at the same time. You did explain though as you are a writer you like to experiment with readers feelings, and with that I say you did a very good job.

You picked a very tricky subject to write about- a lot of people could have been offended, or a lot of people could have felt that they related. I like how it was written, but I didn't at the same time. You did explain though as you are a writer you like to experiment with readers feelings, and with that I say you did a very good job.

I read the summary and there was a warning, so that's good.

Honestly, maybe it's me and my weird self, but I didn't like the fact that this kind of made self harm seem okay. You know? Like when it said, "My beautiful collection of scars that had taken years to build up." I don't think that 'beautiful' would have been the word I would've used. But maybe that's just me. And as it goes on, it continues making this seem as if it's something that okay. I don't know how to explain this, but you did a good job writing. Like, the writing is just beautiful. I just don't like that this, though poetic, makes it seem as if it's something beautiful. The smiling when the blade cuts the skin...I dunno.

I think your writing is beautiful, but I would read your stories if it wasn't something like this. I've never been for suicide and I've never really appreciated the fact that people think it's something beautiful. But, yeah. Great writing. I just wish the topic was different.

Where do I begin? It’s hard for this story as it deals with a pretty intense topic. I did enjoy it and the descriptions were painted pretty well into the words. I also couldn’t help but feel a little frustration for this character, especially at the end where he’s actually getting pleasure out of the pain of others who would search for them. Suicide is a selfish act but to have that mindset along with that act of selfishness is quite disturbing. It’s a great story for drawing emotions out of the reader which is hard to do with me. So, I say congrats for achieving that. In general it’s sort of sad because there’s no valid reason other than ‘life sucks’ type of deal, but in a way I can relate to the cutting aspect as I use to be a cutter years back. It was relatable, even if it was only based off a song, it was depicted well. So great writing, keep it up!

I think there should be a trigger warning somewhere in the summary. It was good, but a little triggering.

Background: I think you would get more readers if you had a background. People tend to be drawn to things with backgrounds.
Story content: Like I said above, it was really good. The grammar, sentence structure, etc flowed perfectly. The only complaint I have is there was no trigger warning. Well, I didn't see one. If there was and I missed it, I apologize.

This was a really good, deep story. <3