The Naughty Nurse - Comments

So I read this one a while back and forgot to comment on it! I loved this one too! UGH, so friggin hot! Loved the end piece, Hallucination or Reality-either way it was hot as hell!

I loved it! It was amazing!
The smut had me melting. My panties melted. Thanks a lot!
Good lucky, love.

Haha I love drunk avenged especially Matt and Brian so funny! I liked the twist at the end and not to mention the hot smut!

Haha I love drunk avenged especially Matt and Brian so funny! I liked the twist at the end and not to mention the hot smut!

You know I adore your stories, and just by the title, I can't wait to dig my fingers into this. x)

It's sad, I am like Johnny when I get drunk. One of the first things I said to my cousin when I got a bit too much of a buzz was a stood up and, "BRING IT AROUND TOWWWWN" and around my hips went. bahaha embarrassed.

Woot woot, Christine. You know, they say that sex helps headaches and all. x'D This was just great. I loved every bit of it. From the funny interactions between drunken friends to the kinky nurse sex.

Firstly I would like to say that this was HOT, like damn girl!

The first thing I loved when reading this was the banter between the boys, it was so like typical laddish behaviour that I would expect from them. Johnny dancing on the table made it for me- the images I had of that gnome thrusting his hips As well as that, I liked how she was in control and Matt was like a little virgin school boy- it was definitely refreshing having the girl taking the lead, rather than having such a dominant Matt all the time.

And then you go and leave a little conundrum- was it a dream or not!? If it was, damn he has one vivid imagination

Overall, great one-shot girl, you should be proud of this piece of juicy smutness

This was.. oh my lorsh (and yes, I said lorsh). It was that great c: the one thing I didn't like was in the beginning it was mainly all dialogue, however you played that nicely and it didn't bother me that much. I have a problem with writing 90% dialogue in my stories ;-; The scene was hot, no doubt. You did a great job :) Keep up the good work.

~Fanfiction Smut contest.

As a non-A7X fan, I find it hard to get into this story. This well written and rather kinky, though
It made me giggle to picture this scene.

That was pretty good! Hot indeed.

totally was wondering if it was a dream or reality. this as a GREAT one-shot! very original plot, not a stale over used plot, I love that in a story even if it's a one-shot! GOOD LUCK!

makes ya wonder if it was real or just a good dream

I liked this. At first I was thinking it was far fetched, but I think he Judy got a good knock on the head. Lol and the sex was hot:)

I'm glad that you told me to read this. Not only was it funny, but it was pretty hot as well. I have to agree with Mattie Sanders, Anne Hathaway was a good pick for this one-shot. The ending was my favorite part, I'm pretty sure Matt is going to be thinking about that the whole way home lol.

I told you that you were going to laugh lol. Oh stop it you helped alot

Hahahahahaha I laughed so hard at the first part especially with Johnny all doing a dirty dance on the table like a little bitch who drank for the first time! LOL Now I know it isn't lie when people say sex can heal anything even a concussion - it looks like he's had one. xD Matt looked like a virgin boy the way he acted all surprised and couldn't contain the happiness in his pants. xD I really liked this one-shot and I'm sure you will win, just a frigid person wouldn't like this it! ;)

And thank you so much for the shout out, even though I didn't deserve and didn't help that much, you made the hard work and you are hilarious! <3

You're writing is very good in all the naughty parts ;)
I couldn't help but imagine the boys as all being pretty camp and drunk because of the way they called Matt, 'Mattie' haha c:
Oh and ps, anne hathaway is gorgeous, you picked a good girl to base this on ;)

Damn that was pretty hot but I'm kinda thinking that he was in a concussion induced dream where he dreamed up a slutty nympho nurse lol

Well...I think I'm gonna need more that just a cold shower now- holy macaroni that was hot! I liked the little twist at the ending where everyone was like 'was it just a dream or was it real?'

The sex was really well written, and I liked that she had control for the most part rather than the man cause sometimes that just gets a little boring to see, so I really liked that part. Also their banter at the beginning- wonderfully written. Drunk A7X is the best A7X.

All in all, I thought this was an extremely well written one-shot, super sexy and very creative with the confession I gave you :) Thank you for entering my contest!

Interesting! I loved it!

This was amazing! <33