Ready or Not - Comments

Well well well Patrick can go fly a kite and Jonathan can shake a stick because Victor is the one Arianna needs to be with and they were so close to being even closer but jumping Joey Smallwood roommate had to call and ruin the mood hahahaha but it was a very cute chapter it was only going to be so long before Victor and Arianna kiss now They need to get together and hopefully this two week road trip without each other might bring up some of these feelings for the both of them!! Oh and if anything does progress with Victor and Arianna or when Patrick finds out wooho there wont be a ceiling felt! drama!!!!! haha Love it <3
Was team patrick but now Victor has stole my heart...TEAM VICTOR(for now)!hahahahahaha

Congratutions on your graduation!!!

This chapter was like whoa... I cried! Team Viktor forever!

Glad you're back!!

OMG!!! This was so worth the wait :) Keep them coming please!!! Cant wait to see what Pat will do once and if he finds out about what's going on.... :) Drama :) I am so excited!!!

She needs to be with Kaner!!! Lol. Keep going.

Wooo! Team Viktor all way, great update as well. :)

Hi! What happened to your story?? Please update! :)

This chapter is AWESOME!! Can't wait to find out what happens between Arianna and Viktor, hope they become a couple! I might freak if I don't know what happens!! Please update!!!!

@ missann10 haha thanks love! I love hearing your comments! Jon is a bit of a pain in the ass huh? Update soon, promise xo

@ Harlaquinpansy no don't worry! I'm rooting for them too haha but there's just something about her and Patrick...thank you so much for your comment! :)

@ Melissa1590 Vik's as sweet and yummy as candy lol! But agreed! The general consensus is Pat's an ass lol thanks for your comment darling! <3

@ abbesin I love how you hold out hope for them! Lol there is something amazing about them together but Vik is doing pretty well for himself right now.. Haha thanks for your comment! Really appreciate it love :)

@ kartal1984 but really, would we expect anything else from Jon at this point? He just seems to love getting involved in this whole mess haha thank you for your comment love! Love hearing from you <3

@ TazerBabyKane9 never say never!! You never know what these characters got up their sleeve ;) thanks for your comment! Update coming soon I promise!! xo

@ kendra-rae once again your comment made my day! Haha I wish I could comment on everything you said but I'm afraid I'll give away something from the next chapter! So happy you enjoyed it!! Thank you again for all your sweet comments! :)

@ jazter well my intention was not to be unpolished or hasty, I actually only realized it came out like that the next day after I posted it. Not sure what happened. My computer had a few versions saved and somehow it did this. If you've read the previous chapters then you'll know there usually isn't this problem. Anyways, thanks for your tip and comment and I hope you continue to enjoy the story and have a great day!

I liked ch. 9 overall but you're switching from past to present tense multiple all over the place (within paragraphs, even) and it's super jarring and makes this paragraph feel hasty and unpolished. You could use the help of a beta reader if you have access to one.

Pat, you're an ass. She doesn't owe you an explanation and she didn't need to warn you she was coming back. Jon, I know you're friends with Pat but your damage control is shitty and badly done. You're being a crappy friend to Arianna. Viktor, you're being a good friend, keep up the good work!

The boys know Arianna so well to tell if she is lying or not and it is so sweet how Jon is worried about her but he is still the real shit disturber that's for sure and a class a asshole too I'm thinking it is one or two things he wants Patick and Arianna together so he's benign mean to her about her And Victor or he secretly likes her and Patrick is just going with the low blow hits there towards Arianna clearly he hasn't told Cailtin about her and saying that he's finally in a real relationship! Jumpin Joey Smallwood he was the one who always cheat on Arianna, never her he's the one who fucked up that relationship he should be pointing the finger at himself before going around when she there and just giving her and the old relationship just one blow after another. I'm so happy that Victor showed up to make her feel 100 percent better, he's always there to pick her up when she fall or to help her along the way that there is a man! I hope more develops between them and I love how Victor don't give two hoots if anyone sees them together or if he goes running out after her. Love it <3

awesome chapter. Pat is just... i wish there was like a way for them to be all cute again at some point but thats probs never gonna happen. lol love it so far!

Great update!!! I loved it!!! :) I can't believe what a little sh*t disturber Jon is being and the Pat treated her, I wanted to smack him upside the head... Can't wait for more!! :)

I cant help it. I want her with Pat. Lol! Good chapter!

Great update! Pat is such a jerk! Jon, too. But Vik is sooooo sweet! Can't wait for more!

lol am I the only one secretly rooting for Viktor and Arianna? Even though I love Pat and her together.

Patrick's an asshole, seriously he is so stupid! I also can't believe Jon agreed to play along and told Viktor not to go, rude much! Anywho, I love Viktor and Ari so much, and I cannot wait to see where this leads!! Great update doll :)

@ abbesin haha thank you! you're so sweet! I can't say who I prefer her with because I'm slightly bias..lol! <3

@ Emily Lane hahah loveee the name. I swear I'm going to use it in this story...just wait and see! LOL can't guarantee what may (or may not) happen between these two...but the next chapter may just kill you even more! I apologize in advance <3

@ kartal1984 update coming super soon i promise! It's taken me so long to write it! It's super long...haha trust me, the first conversation will be in typical Patrick fashion. Thank you for all your comments love!

@ missann10 thank you!!! love reading your comments! the tension was the best part to right! Their scenes together are always so interesting to write! thanks again love! :)

@ daisylove thank you sooo much! update coming soon I swear :)

@ kendra-rae YOUR COMMENTS THOUGH! lol I aboslutely adore them! Jon is a bit of shit disturber huh? I wish I could say he stops but I can't lol! The next chapter is really going to send you a loop...don't kill me! lol thanks again girl! <3

update soon please :)

Well missus you got me nerves GONE! Haha I was even nervous at the beginning when Arianna first arrived at the arena, I thought BAM she was going to run into Patrick and then the shit would hit the fan haha but it is good that she got Sara there at work with her that she already knows so then it is a girl to talk to instead of the boys if anything had to happen! I think Patrick once he starts talking to her is going to have a lot of questions or something like that for her, Victor cannot get any cuter I don't think and for some odd reason I think Jonathan is going to be the real shit disturber between Victor and Arianna & between Patrick and Arianna, I don't know why but it just feels that way to me maybe because its the way he kind of is since he found out that Arianna was back! Cannot wait to see how this pans out :) love it <3

Can't wait to see what happens! Loveeee this story :)