Tomorrow Will Be Kinder - Comments

OMG AHH IM SORRY It's just my sister's name is Alanna...

Hi it's me again, the girl who obsessed over your last story. Although this is still great, I have to say I didn't like how you copied a few things from the book, such as Abram saying "always" like Peeta, or Rue's lullaby which was an old folk song from district twelve so I'm not sure how Abram knew it.And also Liv's little sister being called Posy like Gale's. Other than that, great! Love how Finnick's in your story, yay! The layouts gorgeous and again some super fabulous writing! I know this sounds stupid, but I wish that Katniss was somehow in the story, which is ridiculous because she's only 14 here and she's still a nobody from district 12.

Hi it's me again, the girl who obsessed over your last story. Although this is still great, I have to say I didn't like how you copied a few things from the book, such as Abram saying "always" like Peeta, or Rue's lullaby which was an old folk song from district twelve so I'm not sure how Abram knew it.And also Liv's little sister being called Posy like Gale's. Other than that, great! Love how Finnick's in your story, yay! The layouts gorgeous and again some super fabulous writing! I know this sounds stupid, but I wish that Katniss was somehow in the story, which is ridiculous because she's only 14 here and she's still a nobody from district 12.