My Heart - Comments

I don't even... Like... I AM DYING ID ON'T KNOW HOW I CAN'T FANTHOM IN TO WORDS HOW ONE DOESN'T MELT AND SOB EXTREMELY HARD WHEN THE READ THIS OMG

Okay. But seriously. This was brilliant. The chapters were short and I loved that; it made it easier for me to read and comprehend. Plus your writing style is so neat and clean--it's just as brilliant as this story.

Now, this story. I can't tell if Niall died. I think he did and I think it's Niall's ghost that he's seeing, but, either way, it broke my heart. It was sad, but beautiful... So very beautiful. Great job!

/my sobs/ that was so fucking good and sad and great.

Whoa. I think the short chapters served this story perfectly, and at the end of each one, I just felt more and more haunted.

This story was absolutely flawless. I give you major props for being able to execute such a haunting story that, at times, almost seemed to be, like, light. But once the reader saw past the false tone, it kind of stays with him/her.

Absolutely brilliant. :D

YOUR LAYOUT. HOW WAS THAT WIZADRY ACHIEVED.

Ngf. I just love little chapters that pack a punch. It reminds me vaguely of Kurt Vonnegut's style. So little is said, but so much is meant. Like whoa. Love it.

YOUR CHAPTER BEGINNINGS AND ENDINGS ARE PERFECT ASDFGHJKL.

From the beginning of the third part I just had this heavy feeling in my gut you would end it they way you did I JUST KNEW AND THERE WAS NOTHING I COULD DO TO STOP IT BECAUSE I HAD TO READ TO THE END.

THANK YOU FOR ALL THE AMAZING FEELINGS AND SAD AND NGF