Nam - Comments

I was recommended your stuff by another user, and I'm really glad that I took the time to come and read this. It's heartfelt; it's beautiful and I think it has been written really well. You've got a real way with words; I love how you use that to your advantage. Your description is lovely, not too floral, but definitely not lacking and your use of language is simply breathtaking.

It's only a small piece, but the amount of emotion that you've packed into this was really lovely to read. I adored the Beatles reference with Hey Jude, I think that was a lovely touch.

I absolutely adore this little piece, and I'm definitely going to go and have a read at some of your other stuff! You're a lovely writer!

Well this was a sweet, lovely piece. It's rather quick and sort of hurried, but, still, it's really cute.

I am absolutely enamored with the era that you've placed this story in, so that factor just made me loves this that much more. They little bit about them keeping their names a secret was cute, but bittersweet too because they never got to tell each other.

But, oh, the beginning was what really got me. That little moment when she starts thinking of all the what-ifs and he shushes and reassures her--I swear I melted.

Honestly, this was extremely cute but sad, too, and I enjoyed reading it. :)