Guardian Angel - Comments

Well, this is great story. I always thought that it is so hard to write in a letter format story, but you do it very nicely. It is a peaceful ending and it's a very nice goodbye written. Hope yo see more stories from you and from the character Matthew Guster alright! Keep up the good word and if you want to read my stories feel free to visit.

I have to say I was not expecting what he said in the next part. I was expecting them to have been unexpectedly but tragically separated forever, I was expecting anything but that.

Kudos for taking me by surprise.

This is a tragically beautiful piece.

I think 'letters' have been done, but it doesn't subtract from the quality of your writing. I like that in these letters we can already get a feel for their story. Not just that they loved each other and it was doomed to fail on his part-- but through little things. Like how you casually mention bits about the hospital, how he'd have liked to stay.

Little things that illustrate their love story.

This is a really nice piece. Keep up the good work. :D

This was an incredibly sweet story. I loved the his and hers letter formatting of this and they were both written beautifully. Great job.

Dear author, we seem to comment on each other's stories a lot thanks to comment swap. c: But lets talk about your writing... I loved this, honestly. I enjoyed reading the simple but interesting summary. I enjoyed the chapters, written in the letter format, one his and one hers. I liked the layout and especially the simple banner which fit the short story so perfectly. My favourite sentence of the first chapter was, "But when has impossible ever stopped me?" Also, I loved the past of their lives as you described it, the war and the hospital. I even liked the fact he wasn't the man she thought he was and how he wished he could be. That was absolutely amazing. I give you ten out of ten pens for this well written piece of literature. ~Marian.

Dear author, we seem to comment on each other's stories a lot thanks to comment swap. c: But lets talk about your writing... I loved this, honestly. I enjoyed reading the simple but interesting summary. I enjoyed the chapters, written in the letter format, one his and one hers. I liked the layout and especially the simple banner which fit the short story so perfectly. My favourite sentence of the first chapter was, "But when has impossible ever stopped me?" Also, I loved the past of their lives as you described it, the war and the hospital. I even liked the fact he wasn't the man she thought he was and how he wished he could be. That was absolutely amazing. I give you ten out of ten pens for this well written piece of literature. ~Marian.