@ Codikins5 i'm glad you think so lol i've got back and read it and there's so much i'd change to make it flow better buuuut i'm my biggest critic! but i am really proud of this story/series, i hope you like it!
@ airplanes__ yeah the first story lags in A LOT of places! but i'm glad you like! and i'm so stoked to hear it got you into some new songs ans stuff! best thing ever to hear honestly! the link to the playlist don't work because i changed my tumblr url so here it is PLAYLIST hope that url works. but the second story isn't as slow! promise! and the 3rd is just for fun times because a lot of people wanted a 3rd. love to hear more of your thoughts! thanks for reading!
So it took me three days to finish this story hahah but thanks to it, I've added quite a few songs to my iTunes library. Unfortunately, the link to Ayden's playlist you posted a while back doesn't work anymore :( But anyway, I really enjoyed this story! At some points it got a bit slow but overall it was a great Niall fic.
Amazing. I'm hoping nothing goes wrong but of course there is always drama isn't there :P I'm glad she's going on tour too because she deserves it and it's good for her, but of course it's hard for Niall to believe it's not because of what was going on between them. I would even think that. But, she loves him and he loves her. I know drama will be brought and I'm not looking forward to it but at the same time I am, lol if that makes any sense :) Can't wait for the sequel :) It's obviously going to be amazing!!!
This was such an amazing story :) Although you had a streak of chapters that didn't have a bunch of story development, your writing still made it enjoyable. That's a sign of an amazing writer. I loved all of this and can't wait to read the sequel. THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS FANTASTIC STORY.
LMAO, I can't believe Blue just said that "do you want me to throw you a baby shower or throw you down a flight of stairs?" Horrible but made me laugh out loud. Oh dear, Blue just kept making it worse lol. WOMAN YOU BETTER NOT BREAK THESE TWO UP! Thank heavens she isn't pregnant though.
there's 2 follow ups to this one!
lol i'm glad you liked it!!!!! love hearing your thoughts!