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Oh sorry, it's a mistake that I make all the time and sometimes I just don't realize it so I don't fix it. Once again, sorry and I'll fix it as soon as I can get to a computer, I'm replying you through my I-pod right now.

in the summary, it should be "in their apartment..." not "in there apartment...". Not doing it to be a dick, just figured since this site is for creative writing, you should use correct grammar. There should also be a comma in the last sentence.