I adored it! :) I liked the fact that it had feelings, it wasn't just smut. As the reader you could tell that they loved each other no matter how far apart they were. Great job.
Ok this was amazing! Your writing style is so sophisticated and on point that it was just so beautiful. I love how this whole chapter seemed real, not some over falsified raunchy sex driven chapter, this was something that was real. You are truly an amazing writer :)
February 13th, 2013 at 11:07am
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Thanks for the feedback, guys. I really appreciate it