My... Our little secret. - Comments

Its soooo good and I usually don't like vampire stuff. :)

@ walkingstone72
thank you, this actually means a lot to me. <3

wow i never read supernatural stuff but this is amazing! keep updating please i love it so much. and your writing is perfect (:

@ Of_Clumsy_Words
Thank you so much, I'll be updating in an hour or so. :)

Whoa, I was not expecting that at all! I really like this story! Its really well written and I'm dying to know more!! Please update soon!!

@ Gaskarth's Bitch

@ Ninja123

Thank you! I'll get that going and make it more visible while the story developes, though. :)

Really different from what I was expecting. But I like it so far! Just want mire of a back story on jack and alex

this was really nothing like what I was expecting. I don't really know what exactly I was expecting though. however, I really really like this idea. it kinda threw me off guard for a bit at the beginning because I had no idea it was about vampires until he drank the blood in the bathroom. I guess you kinda wanted to start "in medias res" but I think a little background on Jack and his whole situation would be helpful. Unless of course you want the readers to figure out Jack's character as the story developes. Either way, fabulous job! :) I'm oh so glad you said this wasn't going to be like Twilight because ew. anyway, overall this was really well written and I look forward to reading the next chapter as the story developes :) xx
ps- sorry this comment was so long :)