Get a Life - Comments

I guess I've gotta choose an option now? I guess I'd want choice C to happen first, just cuz it's probably what I'd do. Then I'd choose choice D, because that'd be the second thing I'd do. Then uh... I guess choice E? Just so we can see more of Kody..?

I really like your stories Status message. xD and I really like the story itself. It gives good descriptions of the character and other than a few grammar errors (I only saw them because I'm a grammar freak) it's a really good story. I also like how the readers can choose the fate of the main character. It's different. (:

I think that Cessie and skater guy should have an altercation again, (maybe he pushes her out of danger in a hallway or something) has a little 'moment' with her and Karla and Kody sees and Kody start acting like a bitch to her and then it turns out that Kody is gay for skater guy but Karla doesn't know that Kody is gay. Huh? HUH! Please consider it! I'd like to see how you'd make that! You do a really good job!

Dear author, I liked the story's status a bit too much (:P) and of course I loved the kick-ass story's title, "Get a life". You did a good job at writing the summary but your idea about the readers telling you about the fate of the character should be moved to the author's note. Other than that, there were a few writing typos here and there but nothing too major. Keep up the great work and share your imagination and wonderful descriptions with all of us here in mibbaland. ~Marian.

Dear author, I liked the story's status a bit too much (:P) and of course I loved the kick-ass story's title, "Get a life". You did a good job at writing the summary but your idea about the readers telling you about the fate of the character should be moved to the author's note. Other than that, there were a few writing typos here and there but nothing too major. Keep up the great work and share your imagination and wonderful descriptions with all of us here in mibbaland. ~Marian.

I especially like the metaphor about the puzzle piece and how she doesn't think that she fits in. Its a very good word picture of a feeling I think most people have at least one time or another. It also gives a good picture about her character itself.

Seriously, I really like the 'you choose the fate of the main character' thing. It is new - for this website, and quite refreshing. Other than a few grammatical errors, that are barely noticeable, the writing is really easy, and does not seem forced, at all. I really liked it. I know I commented before, but my phone glitched, and didn't send the whole comment. So, yeah, really good :3

I really enjoyed this. It's not normally my type of story. But I really enjoyed the creativity of the interactive idea. And your writing style is easy to love. Well done! :D

This is a very interesting idea, and the story line is very cool:) I think it quite accurately demonstrates the absurdity of high school life!

This is a great beginning (: keep up the good work and it can only get better. I'm excited to see how it will bloom into something more.

Awesome chapter, glad you took my advice. Keep updating!!!!

I REALLY REALLY like how this story is being made, it's so cool! An I have a few suggestions of my own that you can consider.

Names
Raiden Haze
Alixandra Mathews
Kassadee Lawson
Kaiden Smith
Myra Mirrors

I thing this picture is pretty good to sum up how she looks.
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I want to suggest something as well. This seems like a pretty interesting idea. Could her name be Cessie Andrews? Uh... She should have black, waist-length hair that is very straight and black eyes, too. She is around five feet and four inches tall and she is very polite and nice, but a pushover and easily ignored.

And uh, just for fun we should say that her favorite book series is LOTR ;)

I think her name should be Karla Rvers. Her appearence is; medium length, brown hair light blue eyes and a hint of green. She could be a little on the tall side like 5'7 and have pale skin but not ill-looking. Since she is not really social, she should have two friends. One would be like the really out-going beautiful cheerleader, that everyone wants to date. And the other could be the bad-ass, that no one wants to mess with. I feel like the plot of the story could be, Karla starts to like her new neighbor but soon finds out he is dating her out-going best friend. So she has to deal with hiding her true feelings. The neighbor could join the art class and they begin a friendship. I hope this hepls.