Time Stands Still - Comments

Holy shit, this is such an original story and I love is so much :')

Well, I didn't think Arianna's father could get any lower in my opinion but that just proved me wrong. I hope the fucking douchebag gets ass fucked in a jail cell by a huge guy named Bubba.

The shadow/demon that is following Matt seems to be like it's a good girl, if a black shadow demon can be a good guy. I'm wondering now if it's trying to save her from the other demon or from her father.

Loved it! :)

Well at least one of them isn't bad, and doesn't want to do anything bad to Ariana or Matt :) I'm glad Ariana's dad is locked up in jail. No father has the right to do that to his daughter or son. I want to read more :D

Oh man oh man drama, Ariana's dad is a fucking douchebag I'm glad tht the cops took him away and tht damn shadow tht is following Matt's every move is freaking me out a little bit can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

that was totally a goosebump chapter!! think I had it all the way through!

that shadow that keeps following Matt- and that he seem to be the only one to see- can't put my finger on if it's one of the bad or not.. but if that's the same that keeps telling him to 'save her' then it can't really be bad, right?

her dad.. I mean damn! he needs to get his ass kicked- at least the cops got him now though..

hmm.. what to happen next?? well i'm curious to what brian remembers or whatever from when he was possessed- he does know that something weird had happened at least..

Hmm, weird. I dont think the shadow looming around Matt is threatening, to him at least. I feel so sad for Ariana. Having to deal with all of that crap from her dad and then on top of that the evil Shadows lurking around her. Poor girl. I think Matt should go back and be with her while he can and re-assure her that he isnt just looking to make her a notch in his rockstar belt and cares for her. Another great update:)

It seems to me that the shadowy figure wants Matt to save Ariana.... but from who? Her dad?
Her dad is a total ass and Matt should go back and kick the crap out of him! I think he should tell her too about the voices he's hearing and the shadow he keeps seeing. Great update, as always!

So I just caught up on this story and it is fucking awesome!!
Please update soon :D
Oh, and thank you for your many comments on my story Trouble Makers. Very much appreciated (:

And I'm also sorry as well about your grandfather. Hope all is well :)

Sorry to hear about your grandfather hope everything turns out well!

The update was fantastic as always!

Wow, that is a huge opportunity! I hope she takes it. :)

I'm so sorry about your grandfather. I'll be keeping you and your family in my prayers <3

Family is important. My prayers go out to you and your family.

I'm not liking her father much at all. I can get he's concerned about the age difference but he's going about it like a complete prick.

Great news that Zacky trusts her to leave her in charge but not good that the guys are going to be away and the demon could attack again and she'll only have Gena there.

I hope Brian isn't possessed again, or is he just that suspicious that she's hiding something?

Brian is possesed :/ Her father is mean -__- he doesn't even know Matt -__- but I'm concerned that she will be alone well besides Gena, with that demon hunting her.

Your writing is just simply amazing. I can't get over how much I'm actually liking your stories. Each one is so unique, and so well written. I loved how you described Gena. :3

ooh her father is an ass!! gah do not like him right now..

aawh Z wants her to take over that's so sweet

uhm.. what's bri's deal though, is it because of what happened earlier and that he knows that she's hiding something from him?

awe! so sorry to hear that! I hope that he'll be OK! Massive hugs to you and your fam!

Love it, I hope she takes the job I mean it keeps her away from her drunk ass father, and what's Brian's deal can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Ps. I hope ur grandfather makes it through, thoughts and prays for ur family

@ taken for a fool
thanks babe.....me too..only time will tell

hope your grandpa is okay love x

@ purple89
Okay, cool! And thanks :)