April 25th, 2013 at 09:13pm
@ ebony_goddess
Thanks so much for your feedback!!!! I promise to update asap!!!!
Ebony - Comments
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April 25th, 2013 at 07:53pm
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Just finished reading. Isn't it the most annoying thing ever when readers don't comment what they think :/ personally i think its great. the pace is not too fast and not too slow either so that is brilliant. For some odd reason I see Ebony ending up being burnt on a stake or something. Women in the 12th century would submit to men because they had no equal rights and the children were born knowing only to obey and here is this teen girl trying to defy everything the society stands for. She is a strong female character and speaks her mind out, which is EXTREMELY dangerous in the times she is living in, but just makes me love her more. I see a lot of action in thee near future. Update soon :)April 25th, 2013 at 05:04pm
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Love how it starts with the mystery of the fatherApril 25th, 2013 at 04:35pm
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O.O Okay. I can't wait.February 19th, 2013 at 03:56am
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@ FicticiousDreamz
There's more to this than meets the eye ;) But i shall reveal nothing! More intense stuff is coming soon!
February 19th, 2013 at 03:48am -
Its nice of Carter to help her. But it seems like when he had kissed her in the woods, he was only doing so for selfish reasons. And seeing him at the Brothel, well.....that just pisses me off. Update soon though :DFebruary 19th, 2013 at 03:35am
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@ FicticiousDreamz
I shall do my best!February 11th, 2013 at 03:45am -
I like the story (: And you should really update it soon. Because I really want to continue reading it. :DFebruary 11th, 2013 at 12:36am
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This seems like a very promising story, I can't wait to read more!January 20th, 2013 at 04:04am
will be waiting :)