I really enjoyed this chapter. It didn't go how I thought it would, but it went the way it should. It was beautifully written and was a beautiful chapter, in a very sad way.
The note she left Brian. true and heartfelt in just a couple of lines. leaving the ring? it needed to be done. They love each other and I know they will be together again but they need to be apart to learn how to be together.
I loved her way of coping by creating a creative cocoon of healing. I truly believe that art is the best way to express yourself.
Abbey leaving Chapter 4 was quite a shock, but after her explanation I felt that it was the right thing, for her and for everyone else. She can be creative and a member of the band without all the negative parts.
once again, beautiful chapter. Loved the update and cannot wait to see what happens next.
DAY-UM! You know, that's why I love your writing; it's so realistic. I know if I were Abby, I would have reacted the same way. It wouldn't matter how much I loved that man, I would take time away from Brian to recover and heal. Yes, I'd still love him, but I wouldn't be a push-over and just accept a simple apology.
I agree totally with i_love_to_syn, what the hell Brian! You NEVER hit a lady. I don't care how angry you are, and you have no basis or reason for it. She did nothing wrong. I would so kick his ass if I was Matt, or any of the guys or girls. I am so proud of Matt for sticking up for his sister, how dare Brian raise a hand to hear. I don't even know what to say, I need to see what happens next!
There is some wicked drama happening now. What the hell...Matt, Brian and Abbey in a french prison? This is getting crazy. I am sure that Val and Jimmy will go down and work it out...the arrest at least. The Brian and Abbey relationship thing? well, I don't know what has gotten into Brian, but needless to say, I don't think that Abbey will be putting that engagement ring back on...not for a while at least, and if Brian doesn't change his ways, maybe never.
OH HELL NO! I don't think so. Brian.... so help me God, I would beat the shit out of that man. His actions have no excuse, no basis WHATSOEVER. Grr, I am so angry right now. And he fucking hit her! He's so lucky I'm not a character in this story; I'd be beating the life out of him right now. *deep breath* Well, that chapter was a bit unexpected. Loved it, though ;)
You've left me speechless once again, hun. To be painfully honest, I am envious of your writing style. I wish I could write like you. More soon, please?
I fucking knew that Johnny G. was gonna pull some shit. I'm glad Matt busted through the door, though. Oh, and the ending of the chapter made me smile : )
Abby is preggo!