hi! i totally love your story so i subscribed! :D and i'm commenting to tell you that i did, how much I <3 this story! and how great a writer you are!
so aniwaes, did you get the title of this story off twilight? cos i thought i read about it somewhere in there. hahas. i have to admit, i didn't really get the whole " parents not loving abby cos' she's a girl" thing. like, her parents must be really mean people for being so sexist and all! (i thought it only existed in china! lols)
i like the fact that her band is called chapter four. cos' you know what? i have a bunch of friends whose band is called chapter four too! they had a bunch of names but that one just stuck with them. hahas. cool. that was like , the thing that popped out at me from the story and made me think of my friends.
another thing is that i totally love you long updates and your writing style! you make the characters seem so alive and when they talk, it's just... i dont know. i know that i definitely dont talk like that. i like it. :D
lols. i wonder when matt is going to find out abou the whole love fest going on. (: sometimes, with that many characters in one place, it's easy for me to lose track of who's who. lol.
OH EM GEE.! I HATE THAT FOOKIN BASTARD GARRET.! POOR BRIAN=[[[[[ I FEEL LIKE RIPPIN GARRETS PEEPEE OFF. xD this was oober amazing. I cant believe she didn't remember ther first kiss! how could someone not remember something so wonderful from him?! anyway, you better update soon, or i will have to rip yur peepee off.! tehe, xD ilyyyyy soooo sooo muchhhh.
ooh, first fight. i really hope that this doesn't damage their relationship in any way ( i don't think it will), but you never know. btw, inside the fire rocks lol. great update hun! more soon??
2: O.O Garrett is an asshole. >xD